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Thank you for all the great reviews xD But I am going to continue to leave you all feeling lost.

Will I forget now? Huh? I kind of got left thinking why did you write this. You are going to think, she is so stupid after I have said this ...

Each stanza on it's own is fantastic but they didn't seem to fit together. I was left thinking what? None of that made sense as a whole. I also found ...

Apart from some pretty pictures and words it didn't really work honestly. It flowed well and all but it was just vague and hoenstly just a whole load of pretty ...

I quite like this but not as much as your other poem inspired by a similar theme. Some of the rhythm and flow was a little off it places. Such ...

This is brillaint. I love how you know who your audience are for this poem. I loved the simplicity and the cuteness of it. I wouldn't change any of. It ...

Aww wow these are both really pretty and atmospheric. The top one is the best. I think it shows slightly better photography skills and it is such an unusual sort ...

Yes the way this has been put together looks really crude. The pictures are all at different resoulutions and you can really see where this has been cut out. Also ...

This poem bored me silly. I'm sorry. It has been written a million times before. You haven't gone in depth and exlpained things such as, him lying to you. What ...

I agree with everything good everyone else said xD Great work (:

Haha wow that was pretty good xD It was a really original idea and very patriotic. I didn't understand the Purple Heart bit...maybe that is something to do with being ...

Haha wow this was brilliant and such a unique idea. You wrote this really well with great word choice and description. A few things I think let this poem down ...

I liked the shortness of this poem. There was definetly a hidden message in here somewhere that will take a while to crack. I think you made great word choices ...

Half the idea for this poem was slightly clichetic(make up word I know people) and a few lines I had read before but you twisted it around by not knowing ...

Haha I didn't quite get the concept for the poem but I really liked the poem anyway. I liked the way the "here I am" part follwoed through the whole ...