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I think you have some interesting vocabulary and imagery but there wasn't really enough punctuation and I didn't really get it. Whether that was because it was so short I ...

You had me thinking for some of this poem that the narrator had died which was pretty interesting. Then I got such a shock when I realised what had really ...

I disagree with what evereyone else has said. I liked the sharpeness of it. You had a good word choice. The only two things I found was the sudden change ...

Wow that is a brilliant feature!

Hehe I really liked the sky in the first one, it's so bright. But the bottom of was a little bit dark. It makes me want to go there though! ...

This is really great. I love the posture and shading and it is quite cute yet sad at the same time. I think you should put on some more cobwebs ...

Thanks never noticed this typo. Yeah the ending isn't complete yet and probably needs the most work. Byt yeah thank you all for the positive feedback (:

OK this isn't anywhere near finished yet I just want to know what you all think and help me a little bit. It still needs more to it I know. ...

Not yet but I shall try soon (:

Thank you everyone for your comments.

Alright thank you (: I shall check that out at some point!

I think the first and third ones are absoutlutely amazing! *Fantasizes back to the days when my drawing skills were good* Alas all my talent seems to have dsiappeared. The ...

Hehe I thought it was pretty cool. I think you should make the lines different colours it would look way cool!

I quite liked the first one. I think you need to go into. Photoshop and reduce some of the highligts on the piano keys. It was pretty cool though. And ...

I liked the simplicity of it. I thought it was kind of cute. I can't really make up my mind about the last two lines =S Whether I like them ...