-Save-Ferris-

I thought this was great. You got me hooked from the beginning, and left me hooked until the end. My only complaints are a couple of sentences that sounded awkward: ...

I like it (: The concept is good, and its a sweet yet powerful peice. It just needs refined and expanded a little (I don't mean add tonnes of stanzas, ...

Would you consider Tara(my name) to be a strange name? Or Kali? Or Hester? Or Dee? I would. 'Cause in my "wee group" there are five of us(yeah I know ...

Personally, I just choose names I like. And I don't like names that appear on the top ten names of the past however many years. Which generally makes them relatively ...

So there you are all entusiastic about your new novel, can't wait to get in all out on paper. Chapter One bursts onto the page like a water balloon all ...

Latin + French all the way man! I do love English and music too though.

That's pretty much exactly right (:

Well I'm Tara or Save-Ferris, take your pick. I am interested in a great amount of things. I've been on here for a while and have a few things up ...

Somebody review please?

Hmm is this something to do with you've never really been a sexual person but like this person has kind of drawn you in and you're prepared to explore in ...

This is a poem based on a part of one story I'm writing. Not too sure on it to be honest. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Intricate detail might be a little too much ...

OK I agree with what you are saying about punctuation and agree it needs to be revised. However you said it is just a lot of images. It is an ...

An entrance to the beach, through the back door of a truck Designed for land and water Lined up by its fellow machinery Soldiers first greeting from new lands, a ...

Well basically I've had this idea for a novel. Its about this bunch of people and how they don't realise that the way they treat one of their friends and ...

I thought some of your imagery and description was absoutlutely beautiful. Here is what I like and what I think you should change about each of them. Sun I loved ...