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Ok wismann, I'm going to try and give you a very indepth review :D I'll go through the problematic areas first. The witches Madeline, Rose, and Sarah Canaby [I would ...

Alright, I thought this was a really interesting concept, and I really enjoyed this poem. I think the very first two lines were unnecessary.... when reading it, I sort of ...

Arwen Yeah I didn't nick that from LOTR.... *shifty* Seventeen year old boy, messed up his life with drugs. Nearly lost contact with his whole family. However he has a ...

Could have nothing to do with slaughtering, or could be totally generic and be about killing, blood etc etc. Magic Carpet Ride

It really is just all talking :/ And most of it is pretty dry, it doesn't give much life to the characters. The guy who had brought in the patient. ...

Doesn't really bother me to be honest.

I thought this was an interestind idea, and I want to know more! But it is as has already been said, too short! I know this is a prolouge, but ...

Ah well thanks for you honesty and pointing out of some very silly mistakes on my part :D(the whole how many days in a year thing, didn't really think there). ...

This is the half finished prolouge to the first novel that have serious plans about finishing. I do have the second half of the prolouge, but it's really unpolished, pretty ...

Number one: Once upon a time there was a happy kingdom ruled by a beautiful queen and a handsome king. Number two: Hi my name is Izzy and I have ...

Yeah this read totally like something out of a novel to me. I didn't feel like poetry. Or perhaps as if you were describing it to someone face to face? ...

I can't think of anything to put in it. 10/10 way cute.

October Girl, yeah it is me (: And 10/10. Haha funny ^_^

7/10 Quite cool, bitty stereotypical though.

How very true... >.