-Save-Ferris-

I was expecting a lot more from this when I read the first two lines however the rest of it was just a whole load of terrible cliche lines. Some ...

Thank you for the great comments everyone (:

Mmmm......spaghetti *yum* Em yeah welcome....*thinks of spaghetti some more* Hmmm I think I'm gonna...you know...get...some.....spaghetti...

Hello Abbey (: Newb hehe. Naw only joking with you (: I hate that when you want to say something funny but nothing comes to mind =/ Sweet avi chose ...

We had to write this in a week with a maximum of 800 words...mines is about 950 words. Look I am terrible at keeping to word limits. I don't care ...

^I agree to the above. Minus the fact it wasn't even romotely humourous. I'm not trying to be nasty.

Wow, I wasn't expecting such an excellent repsonse (: I agree with you all completely about the title. I thought that before I posted but decided to leave it because ...

Thank you for the feedback you too. I know it's probably a difficult poem to understand.

10/10 I think it is really cool. I love it.

8/10 It's funny. I want it but I don't have it. Hehe.

I feel intimidating. I won't beat you up, but, I could bring you down. Because of my full speed, no traffic lights mouth You wouldn't know where to go Then ...

When I first read what had inspired you to write this poem I expected it to be written from your point of view looking at your friend not from your ...

Hello Ari (: I have a cat as well (: She's called Kiki. She's completely thick. Haha. Anyway welcome to YWS (: Ferris AKA Tara

Wow I thought that was amazing. It was a brilliantly clever unique idea that you've excequted incredibly well. I am not sure about the bold. Whilst it was a good ...

Apart from the last three lines(they honestly just didn't fit) this poem was great. I like the cut off sentences, it gave it someone, what I'm not sure. I like ...