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This was sweet, definetly sweet (: I thought your description was really nice. For the majority this read very prose like, which mainly work, especially in the third and fourth ...

It's coming to an end [s]With[/s] For my boy and me, I'm leaving town So it's best that I'm free[s],[/s] . Yet for months I've had planned Planned what? If ...

Haha this was funny. Yeah it was definately a relief from much more darker stuff. I agree though the whole poem being written as someone talking, hmm didn't tickle me ...

Do you have a thing for scaffolding perhaps? :P I think the first one could be good if 'MacMillan Academy' or whatever it's called was cropped out and there was ...

Some parts of this really confused me. They were just too rambly >.< E.g: "A Darren-like incident?" She asks, though she already knows the answer. She's reffering to 8th grade, ...

Yeah this was very good. As Angel of Death said it's very simple but carries a strong, and beautiful message. I only had a few problems with this. Firstly I ...

This is good for your first attempt :D It sort of confused me a little and I didn't quite understand what was going on. I felt that the final three ...

Pretty please :smt085 Neither are finished but I would be uber please if you critted :D

Hmmm I just wondered if you planned on writing anymore on this. It really felt like it was going somewhere and I want more, MORE! But yes anyway, I would ...

Sorry I will try hard to finish things in future before posting. I know this is poor but I really needed to put it somewhere that wasn't my head >.< ...

Sorry double posted by accident >

Chapter 1 Have you ever gotten a headache? Probably. Have you ever gotten an “oh my God this hurts so bad I just want to die” type of headache? Probably ...

What if neanderthols(however you spell it) lived alongside humans in modern day society?

Supposedly crime rates in Britain have gone down? Why then does everyone think differently then? I think it is because there are more types of crime now....crimes that are a ...

Aww that was the funniest night of my life! The old Croatian guys! And other various absoulutely hilarious things. Like the Spanish guy. That rocked. I LOLed when I found ...