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I thought it was brilliant. My only problem is the last line in the second seemed a bit off rhythm. But your ideas and description were great. I liked the ...

I seem to have a constant case of writer's block. I know what I want to write, I just can't write it. All my writing seems to be accidents(well my ...

I am reading a trillion books right now...well maybe not that many XD 1. Harry Potter 7(No I have not finished it yet) 2. Just Listen by Sarah Dessen(My Latin ...

Wow this was brilliant. It flows really nicely and you've really brought your emotions across. It was simple and I am sure something a lot of people can relate to. ...

Wow they are really great. Fantastic photography skills.

Well I really liked it. Although some bits seemed a little off. Here is what I would do: [s]thoughts[/s]Thoughts untold [s]are[/s] Lie deep within this mind [s]things[/s]Things that go unsaid ...

Yes I agree, I was getting a little bored by the end. You have some great writing skills, I think you just need to cut it down a bit. There ...

All right welcome XD Your English is really good. And I can read French...kind of! But anyway welcome (:

Yeah it's a great place XD I was like wowzer when I found here!

If I see something that is worth critiquing I will critique it. It pretty much evens out to once a day, maybe sometimes more.

I just found this on my computer in My Documents and liked it and decided to post it. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ The truth is I may walk away, But I’ll come back ...

Language/Description. Many other factors of my writing need worked on.

It's fun, it's an escape, I can express myself and if I stop I will die. Plus a multitude of other reasons.

For poetry/scrappy writing: Black or blue biro or black gel pen. For stories I am properly writing: I write them on paper first, or in my mind then on the ...

Milk and Costa Frescatos XD