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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Carnival: Chapter One

    The sun had nearly set and although it had not grown completely dark yet the Carnival was already turning into a sickly neapolitan light fantasy. Gia only added to this ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: At Least

    Hmm I'm thinking this might some kind of smiley acoustic, blue eyed soul type thing, like a sort of Paolo Nutini tune :D ================================================================= At least you'

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: I hate you with all my hearts

    Yeah I can't really tell what time of tune this'll have. I'm assuming some sort of rock , distorted guiatrs, but slow? I have no idea. I saw where you ...

    Jul 25, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Get 'Em While They're Hot!

    Done:D

    Jul 22, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Love Note (Chapter one, edited)

    A cry of surprised pain was almost drowned out by the crack of gunshot. Like a scene from a movie, a teenage boy clutched his bloodied chest and fell over ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Get 'Em While They're Hot!

    Cool :D

    Jul 21, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Get 'Em While They're Hot!

    C'mon children! Gimme something to review!

    Jul 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Magic Carpet Ride - Chapter One {unfinished}

    Thanks for both your reviews (: Em can I just clear up that despite the dates, it isn't actually supposed to be a diary >.< The prologue, chapter one and ...

    Jul 20, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Wise Reviewing

    Do you want to do the first chapter of 'Magic Carpet Ride' for me? :D P.S Canaby Witches, finished it, forgot to PM you, I really like it. I think ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Get 'Em While They're Hot!

    Oh how I wish I was selling some lovely fresh doughnuts. Unfortunately not. Anyway I do sell reviews :D I'll pretty much review anything except for scripts ('cause I know ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Blinkingly-good Crits

    Seeing as you've had no other requests could you please review the prologue and first chapter of my sad excuse for a novel 'Magic Carpet Ride' Neither are finsihed but ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Dialogue in Mutes

    Read 'The Roman Mysteries' One of the main characters is a mute (:

    Jul 19, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: more of my artistic ability (bad spelling and all:)

    Oooh wow the bracelet looked near professional (: I uber liked the last one. Thought it was tres tres cute :D Obviously what with the second drawing being manga and ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: BAND.. YAY!!!... Will add more when I feel like it...

    Aww these are cute. But the clarinet player looks like they are eating their clarinet? Why is the flute so BIG? Trumpets are held more upright. The precussionist looks like ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alone With The Sky

    This was sweet, definetly sweet (: I thought your description was really nice. For the majority this read very prose like, which mainly work, especially in the third and fourth ...

    Jul 19, 2008


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath