-KayJuran-

well this post has confuzzled me just a little... it's a bit of a random thing to start ranting about isn't it? what exactly do you mean by 'the code'? ...

So... uh... whats wrong with being in the first year of college?!? I'm in a sixth form but they call it a technology college (that just means they get a ...

love is a bullet which pierces your heart and can never be removed. i think this is the best line... When I look into those fiery eyes I know you ...

I started to wonder... Where did that really come from? Was that really what was inside my mind? Sure I had thought about committing suicide but I knew I could ...

that is so scary... whoever that was it sounds a lot like me... oh well you dont wanna know about that. :roll: anyway i love the poem... never read anything ...

At least you guys have some sort of climate! In Britain, it's just gloomy, a bit damp, a bit cold, a bit dark. It's not actually anything! It's so infuriating, ...

ive never played d&d but ive got a group of friends who do... ive always wanted to try it but i cant help thinking i'd make a mess of it... ...

i agree with sam - in lines 2 & 4, 'see' should prob be changed to 'sees'. of course thats up to you...

i like the meaning behind this poem... i just think maybe you need to work on the rhythm a bit more... it should flow better but dont worry im sure ...

this isnt really the kind of style of poem i usually go for but that doesnt mean it isnt good! :P i dont know why but i see this in ...

thanks you guys!!! :P if anyone wants me to look at their poems then just ask cause ive decided i need to look at other people's more... :wink:

i knew she went by firebird which is why it took me a while to finally post it... wasnt too sure what she'd think. i like that you said it ...

i like it. My heart has been sealed, Or so I’ve been told. best lines, i think. again, you have an excellent poem and it's dark in it's own way. ...

EBM is known for havin a v funny pic at the bottom of his signature... :D

my thoughts exactly! if they're gunna eat it cuz they need to survive then fine but all fox hunting is to me is a blood sport... i know a lot ...