-KayJuran-

weird i can see it for a few secs if i refresh but thats it... i like it, especially the way it doesn't have to be overly complicated to be ...

just put this onto Word so i can look at it while not spending my parents money on Internet. i'll get back to you! :wink:

Hey! Thanks for the comments and for replying so quickly! I'm sorta surprised you like the dialogue 'cause I never thought I was any good at dialogue really... Do you ...

it says there's nothing there

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maybe one day i will get round to posting a pic... can't be bothered right now, i need my sleep

omg so many choices! most probably a cat of sorts, or maybe a wolf or a husky... maybe a pebble would be interesting

*shakes head* it's not even a long thread!

i hate it when threads get as long as this one so they're too long to read (or at least if you're as lazy as me...)

* * * * * With the tavern almost empty, the bard packed away her instruments and joined the barkeep and the rest of the staff for a late-evening meal. ...

“Take cover!” A flurry of arrows flew over the man’s head as he dived behind a nearby rock. Pressing his back closer to the cold stone, he tightened his grip ...

Hmm... I don't know if this is the right category to put this in but I'm sure you'll let me know if it isn't... I tried a new approach with ...

that is the longest crit i have ever seen! well done you

^ is (apparently) as mysterious as hell... i would say 'lives in macedonia' but thats probably been done about 47 times already ::)

yeah i'd like to see it. never felt dialogue was one of my strong points but i should include it more - i use way too much description...