-KayJuran-

Chapter I Heads turned at the unusually well-dressed man who walked into the tavern that night. Lace trimming at the end of his perfectly white sleeves, leather boots reaching to ...

Thanks J. You must have posted at the same time as I did! Anyway, I am now posting chapter 1 (though not quite finished) Haven't sorted prologue so not posting ...

don't tell any of my friends i said this but i think it's quite sweet! i'll go for romantic.

woah go bobo!!! love the eye at the bottom of the second one! and the fire around his hands. :D again... go you!!!

woops forgot to click on second link... *embarrassed* slightly random but those things are really cool! remind me a bit of moogles in ff!!! :)

Thanks erethror! I like free-writing as a sort of draft as well! Will hopefully have finished first draft of chapter one and prologue by tomorrow so I should be able ...

Looks like I'll have some more stuff soon! Some of you will be pleased to know I now have a general plot to it. I'll post what I've written sometime ...

i agree with bobo, you might need a bit of work on anatomy, but what the heck! your colouring is great! and you can def draw better than me!! :( ...

what sound? what music? how come i don't remember hearing any?! :'(

when do americans start uni? i've still got two years to go cause i'm having a gap year. going to cardiff open day tomorrow!! :)

i like the one with glasses. reminds me a bit of me!

don't worry if they take a while. a lot of us have school or college so we know what it's like. i'm finding it hard enough just to write my ...

Whoa, thanks for that! I need to print all this!

Thanks for the comments and akisha, thanks loads that was really constructive criticism! I'll look over those things again! :P

thats really sad! i cant believe he died!!! seriously though, i liked it a lot. ok so there were quite a few improvements needed (spelling for a start!) but he's ...