-KayJuran-

Few typos, but apart from that, I liked this new development. I can really see these characters, the way you write they really *do* seem real. I'll try and do ...

i'm not sure which one i'm using. anyway, it's grey with blue and i like that one. :P

Doe:: you're so pretty! and I'm loving the purpleness under all those flowers! :P marching_gurl:: also looking pretty in photo, 'cept it looks like you're hiding(!) :wink: yay i can ...

I asked my computing teacher, who's one of the mods on Wikipedia, and he promised to have a look at it for me! So.. I don't know if that'll help ...

^ window; he slowly squeezed his warm bun, wisps of smoke drifting into the air like ghostly hands. It's actually meant to be 'drifted' because Marcus is squeezing the bun ...

welcome karidya! cool name :wink: um i hope i get this right... assulam aleikum!! hehe my friend taught me... :P

I LOVE Cherish and Eclipse but it would have looked better in colour. Cherish actually reminds me of the portal thing Doctor Who uses when he's in the TARDIS and ...

Ahh ... Chippies ... a British instituition. Too true, Fire. Too true. :wink:

The face does look a bit neglected... but I think that's just 'cause everything else is so detailed, almost crowded in some places... My favourite bit has to be the ...

vanished oil-paintings ^ va r nished. ran to raised chair ^ ran to a raised chair was the Cook at Weir House, it was ^ at Weir House ; it ...

Liking the captions Emz! :P 'cept you should make them move like your avvie, which... isn't moving at the moment... hmmm. Hehe I was hiding from the camera and Ian ...

By the way, this isn't a real introduction, nor is the subsequent diary real ^ The way you wrote this; until I got to this point, I actually started believing ...

But I guess if you went to a 'burger joint', you wouldn't be going for fish and chips; you'd be going to eat burgers primarily. I'm not sure the chippie ...

Whoa! :shock: I like the first one best :P How do you make them?

Uh-oh... I don't think Renee's going to be happy :? I did see a few things I can critique on but a) I'm meant to be doing coursework and b) ...