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Irish Gaelic looks so pretty! - I want to learn it!! :P Can't find much that needs improvement. I'd agree with the others in that both dialogue and dialect are ...

I think outlines are a good idea. It's just that I'm not very good at them, so a lot of the time I just don't bother with them. I've got ...

were deep in conversation. ^ The 'questioning' seemed quite uncomfortable, if anything, and for this reason, I wouldn't have said that they were 'deep in conversation'. You could actually say ...

...You know what I say to that? PAH! Yeah, you heard me. :P We english are simply too polite...we let other countries beat us at stuff. :D Lol, I agree, ...

I'm liking that idea. :P You've got my vote!

Lol, don't worry, I won't. :P He wouldn't believe me anyways... :wink:

Please don't put pictures in signatures, I will commit suicide. Ooh! And a piggy smilie! Because we like pigs... ^ Agree with both. And I reckon if we get audio ...

As TBR said, the guy would prob have had to have long hair for this to work, but then if you watch Pride & Predujice, there are some guys in ...

Thumbs up to you SL! :P I've got a friend who loves that sorta style of drawing, so I'm thinking of showing it to him if that's okay with you. ...

Okay, all of the chapters 'cept the latest one are on my pen drive, so I *promise* I'll crit at least part of it this week. I want to be ...

And there was me thinking I'd be the first to post... Ah well. Yeah.. I agree that Macbeth was more than a little odd, 'cept it has to be one ...

Had she seen this coming? If so, who had pushed Tina..? Just because she didn't like the other girl; that was no reason not to look into this.. Murder, that's ...

Can I have a go at colouring in too..? I like colouring in.. :P

Thanks for the crit, Fire! Very helpful. I thought you were English! Use an 's'! We're not American blasphemers. ^ arg! What am I doing?! I've obviously been on this ...

No idea how it works. Looks a bit gimmicky to me though.