-KayJuran-

That's alright then. I was just about to tell you off for being mean to the newbie. :wink: Anyways, um.. welcome! (back)

I think this was well-written, and it had an interesting storyline. I don’t really think you need so much swearing though, and there was a lot of slang. That doesn’t ...

Ah, Adam, you already know I love it. ;) Though.. y'know, maybe I'm biased what with me being in it and all.. There are a few spelling and grammar errors ...

Brandon Wallace? Hm.. that's the only Brandon I can remember.. Welcome anyways! Not that I really need to say it, but feel free to pm me if you need help ...

Hey! You think you can get member of the week again? Feel free to pm me anytime if you ever need help. :)

Aha, thanks Nate. I was very confused when I couldn't make the portfolio thing work.

Oh, I have some new Italian CDs.. maybe I should start learning if it's going to be our new world language.. :wink:

I've never heard of 'crimson tears' being a cliche, but I'd agree with the crying themes. I actually quite liked it. The beginning was definitely the best bit though, as ...

A beautiful paradise all alone while the sun in the sky dimmer shone. I'm pretty sure this doesn't rhyme, unless Americans pronounce one of these words differently.. The last line ...

Thanks for the comments! Gummy, that was really helpful. I thought there was something odd about the brackets, but I couldn't see how to fix it before.. so thanks for ...

*bows* Welcome back, Sab.

Hehe. Yep. :)

I couldn't find the portfolio thing from the user IDs last time I looked.. maybe I'm just looking in the wrong place, but.. are they there?

Hehe, I barely knew you back when.. *hugs* T'is DD!

I PMd you Nate, so please don't get rid of the languages. I like the sub forums idea..