-KayJuran-

I'd prefer it if the format were different when you posted.. spaces between paragraphs makes it a whole lot easier to read. :wink: I think you definitely have a good ...

^ Has got me wondering what the E.A. stands for in E.A. Extraordinaire..

Not sure what I think about the repetition of 'dance' - it doesn't really bother me much.. in fact, I'd almost go as far as to say that it adds ...

Have I not said hi yet?! Shocking! Welcome back home, Emz, and glad to have you here. :) Can't say I've met many with as much personality as you. Make ...

Okay, as much as I loved it, I think the beginning may need some work. I had to re-read it before I realised who was doing the talking. It's not ...

^ Is DD and therefore amazing. :)

One thing I don't understand.. she's running, clutching on to her bag, obviously in a bit of a panic.. and yet, at the beginning, you say she's 'plodding' along. As ...

Um.. in the blogs, the smileys and the 'listening to...' things are funny. The smileys don't show up, and the 'listening to' thing repeats itself. I think that's a bug.

^ Likes cats.

Likes to give very prettiful smiley gifts. :) Especially to newbies - oh, and she's a greeter too.

Hey, if you think it's good enough, then submit it! Oh, and if you don't think it's good enough, just edit it a bit more, and then submit it. :wink: ...

Look! A double gift - you got everything twice! :) Welcome back, Adam. So is the Dark Fantasy group still running?

True. Chobits is pretty great. :) Welcome home, _fallingstar_ Hehe, can I shorten that to star? Otherwise, it'll be too long.. :wink:

Nice to see you around, fishr! Still with that oh-so-famous avatar, too. :wink: