-KayJuran-

"OH NOES, NOT PAT BUCHANAN!" =P

Privyet back! =D I know what you mean about symbolism. My NaNo's probably going to be full of it. ;) What sort of genre stories do you write? Or do ...

Thanks so much for the critique Matt! =) I generally don't like second person narrative very much, and find it difficult to write, but this wasn't too bad. Hm, so ...

Clau -- Hurrah! =D Only I'd have to think about my title first - I thought I had it but I might ask around first to see what people think ...

I really hope this makes sense as it's sort of based on a story I was planning once. I'd like to know how it sounds to people who don't know ...

Couldn't find a lot wrong with it grammatically. Just one or two things I should mention: I'm often told that love is the best, feeling to have deep in your ...

Musuko - it'd be better if you edited your first post, rather than posting several times. PM me if you don't know how. =) As for me, I voted Pat, ...

Trident makes a good point. Imagery and metaphors could add a lot of depth to this. At the moment, it's nice, but just nice... I really think you can make ...

Because of those hundred, only three people got constant constructive criticism and support. I'm... not so sure. Of course, constructive criticism and support are great, but I would argue that ...

Hi Kat! Welcome to the site. =) I love the avatar by the way, even though, like you, I didn't notice the HP link until it was pointed out. Woops! ...

It's not so much that it's too long exactly... it's just that it's currently very hard to read and therefore critique due to it's format. But don't worry! All you ...

With the map, I may have a few tips as to how to improve... if only because I love drawing maps. =D Start with pencil, preferably something like 2B. I ...

:shock: I want one too! Hehe. :P It's really good though. What I like most is how you used black and white photos, as well as the close-up eyes versus ...

Just a rough effort. The story should be posted soon. These are lyrics for a song, right? So I'm guessing from this part ^ that it would be part of ...

Nate spamed the site I had been on, YFW, and it died. I migrated over here, partly at the instance of other members I'd know from YFW: Crysi, EBM, Tara, ...