-KayJuran-

Anyone seen the film of it? Not sure if there's more than one, so for clarity's sake, the one with Gerard Depardieu starring. Have to say, from what I've seen ...

Is the book available in the UK or only in the US?

I second Sureal... That's a LOT of posts, at least according to the new-posts page that I was on earlier. ;) Seems I won't have to help you too much, ...

Hi Kuhinoor, Hopefully, you'll find this is a good place to improve your writing. I know I have. ;) Have fun here, and feel free to PM me anytime. Kay.

I don't think Zeige rhymes with cheese... at least, not if it is indeed a German word. Maybe... TSEYE-guh.

Snoink -- I like that last one... sounds fun! Thing is, with me, sometimes I hear something that just sounds so good for a title, I have to write it ...

Icaruss -- that sounds like a pretty cool way of doing it. Sort of symbolic.

Well, I can see the formatting looks a lot better. More paragraphs = good. ;)

Hi Zeige, Name sounds German -- does it mean anything or did you just make it up? I'm sure I should know if it does, but... I'll forgive myself for ...

One thing I would suggest: I know Yuudia is male and Sora is female, but because of the names being foreign, it can be hard to tell. Perhaps you could ...

Would you hit me if I said that the second one looked like Yoda...? *flees*

Let's see... I work. I'm a dinner lady at a girl's school, a waitress at two places, occasionally I do pot-wash, and I also tutor French and German. Aside from ...

Okay, I'm going to write anything I see down as I read, then I'll put any first impressions or thoughts about the characters at the end. Here goes... She shivered ...

Thanks Bob! :) I'll check it out as soon as I can.

Just wondering, 'cause it's something I've been doing recently. I like to have titles that are catchy, or play with words, or just sound good . If I hear a ...