*~DesTinEE~*

Hi, my name is Destinee as you can see. This poem just caught my attention. . . I really loved this stanza [quote]I feel the wicked eyes of my captors ...

Hi, I really loved the third one I don't know why. . . It just got to me I love the way the windows are and the fourth on on ...

Hi, I don;t know why but I feel there could have been more, you know? That's just me though, you are the writer. I liked where you were going though ...

This is not that bad, I liked it. If only it weren't so sweet This game of deceit I don't know why this line jumps out at me. I think ...

When I’m with you The whole world melts away behind us You take me from my own darkness And bring me it to your everlasting light Your voice gives me ...

Aww how simple and sweet just one thing though I think you made a mistake just a real little one My temperature is over ehating. Did you mean over heating? ...

Actually I really liked where you were going with this poem. I can relate, you know and you described how I have felt before. Isn't that a part of being ...

Thanks for all of the tips. I really appreciate it, I'm trying this out writing thing out for a change. I think I'm going to hit the books and figure ...

This is so different... but some how better. I don't understand what it was that kept me reading, to be honest it kind of gave me the chills. I liked ...

This is good, really good! It's short but full of so much feeling! My favorite line Doubled over, she cried Knowing that he had only lied So true they lie ...

NEW AND IMPROVED! Thanks for the tips JC!

As I sit in the dark corner, I listen in shock. It's quiet for once And the silence is terrifying. As I rock back and forth I am relieved To ...

How true you are my friend. How can people be so blind? How can they just close their eyes when the truth is to hard to ugly for them to ...

Wow... what an interesting view of the world! So intense I like it! Doesn't everyone want a fairytale ending? lol

Hello there Midnight Bliss! I'm new at this whole thing too, but yeah I like the name kind of mysterious! lol Let's see what are some questions you haven't been ...