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*Humph! What am I going to write now? Nice, JC xD* Marianne Alex drove me to the coffee shop, and we talked. About everything, I believe. It was dark outside, ...

Hi Heart! I'm Kat, and I will review this piece of yours :wink: I'll do line by line grammar and punctuation corrections, and sometimes some meaning or imagery comments. Line ...

Yeah, because it's like if we aren't in it, he's going to be like in a sub-story, because he's away from the group. I think. Oh an dsorry for the ...

Oh, men! Now I have to make Maria date Alex. Damn it!

*So, you decided to kill him?!*

So, are they all going in the games?

*So, is everyone entering the games? If so, we need to find a way of getting them there.* Zane I didn't even noticed when I got sleepy. Neither when I ...

*Hum. Thanks, JC. Long post, sorry.* Marianne Why had everyone left on their paths? I couldn't believe it! We hadn't solved anything in that damn conversation! I decided to talk ...

Hi GamesEnd! How are you doing? I believe I haven't met you. I'm Kat, and I will be your reviewer for today! On to it! Line to stanza comments! There ...

Hi by my rules! Nice name :wink: I'm Kat, nice to meet you and welcome to YWS dear! If you need anything to find your way around, feel free to ...

Hi Meep! I'm here as requested, dear. I am very sad to say I won't have many things to say. This wonderful piece has already been very well criticized, and ...

Zane I glanced over my head, and saw Cappy talking to Jason. He had big bruises all over him. "I'm guessing that means civilization isn't going to help us." I ...

*Hum. My character just killed a human, so* Arabella I walked away of the bleeding body, almost running, when I passed a vulture who apparently saw me killing that young ...

*Can someone bring Maria in, please?*

*Sure do ^^* Johanna Avelle and Madeleine, the two young ladies that I knew could see things as me and Felicity, left shortly after our disagreement. I believed they we're ...