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Hi Kala! Welcome to YWS! Oh dear, this is a wonderful piece! I must say, I completely adored it! A few nit-picks: Below the branches, here about, Do not you ...

Nope. I have some issues with balance. TPBM is going to beach this weekend.

What?! Why??? You have important characters in this!

Hi Laydra! Welcome to YWS! Oh my, Selene has already covered almost everything, so I'd like to bring out your rhyming. Aside from your grammatical errors, I have found three ...

Yes. Oh sorry I did not know that ^^ I'll stop right away. Oh man, on her birthday? That will be really mean... Go right ahead! :D

8/10. It has blue and black, an expectational beautiful tone of blue. It appears to have an evil face, that resemble a skull. And I really like skulls. :D

You get an escape ticket to run away from the active volcano, that once was Chucky. -inserts coin-

Banned for not banning hobbes for his grammatical errors on his banning sentence.

Not really. It's kind of cold... but I do like midnight walks... TPBM is on vacation! *throws confetti*

Welcome to YWS, Kikkara! I'm Kat. Nice to meet you ^^ Oh, don't worry about your English. We can see that are some mistakes and some verbs missing, but YWSers ...

Oh my... it's been almost a day since the last post... Kat on to the rescue! Oh and I'm making her birthday the next day, just to speed it up ...

You get Chaky, Chucky's wife mad at you, waiving a sword aroung. -inserts coin-

Right now, I would die for a piece of chocolate!!! TPBM has been to London.

Banned for having a very confusing sentence, when you could have put your meaning into one simple short one.

The ice cube kindda reminds me of you. 7/10 :D