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My darlin' sister... you may know her... she comes on here every once in a while. :wink: She invited me.

But. Um. Who worries about seemly or decorous? Do you? um... yes... Is that bad? I'm always not doing or saying things because I'm afraid of making an idiot of ...

I'm not sure it's amusing... but it was poignant. I agree that this isn't amazing as more than a personal piece of writing... simply because I don't think it makes ...

I'm enjoying reading this. I do have a few comments though. Firstly, I don't get how the title works into the story. So far, you have focused on Christmas because ...

awww... this is making me sad...

This is pretty much amazing! I love the idea behind it... I think it is very true. I don't know if this is killing in war or not, it kinda ...

This is hilarious! I am a Michelle Branch fan... apparently no one else here is... but that doesn't keep me from enjoying this. Very creative. *thumbs up*

Laugh. Dream. It is the children who know where the fountain is from which spring life’s greatest joys. They alone recall the path that leads to the fairy lands where ...

You guys keep commenting on my writing skills. I'm very happy that you all enjoyed this. I did too and this is certainly flattering. But as Sarah pointed out, I ...

Thanks for all the comments and compliments.... wow I didn't expect this many responses. 8)

That's really interesting... of course, I haven't seen "League of Extraordinary Gentlemen" so I have no more of a clue than Reese. But, I love how you pull other stories ...

This is adorable. It made me smile also. A few comments... In the fifth line "lifes" should be "life's". The rhythm of the second line is off. I got a ...

Thank you for you enthusiasm. :D But really I would love a total critique with all the shredding that you see fit. This just kinda fell onto paper today because ...

This is an excellent intro to a story. I hope that you post more. You created depth by mixing the past, the present, and the future all together. And, as ...

Don’t believe it. Someone is trying to spread the rumor that life is easy. But you aren’t going to let them feed you that pack of lies are you? I ...