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oh... right... sorry. That's what I meant. :oops:

Well... I know that they are pirates. So, it does make sense if I give it thought. However, it kinda caught me as off while I was reading. I'm not ...

*is very excited to see another chapter up* !!!! 4 comments: 1. LOVE IT! (hehe) 2. Watch those typos dear... *shakes finger at Dusky* 3. You refer to Clinion and ...

“No,” Four interrupts. Her voice is taught. “No.” This is the wrong form of the word. It should be "taut". I liked this... but I'll tell you, it was a ...

For Dusky inspired by and dedicated to my amazing sister Struggling through quicksand, failing to stem the tears you’ve cried, trying to take off when gravity feels like it’s multiplied. ...

The plot thickens... Two things: firstly, I don't understand how Elana failed to pick up that Falcon is one of the Valeen. I mean, I know that she sees her ...

That hardly seems possible if it doesn't have active members though...

ah... the destinction between groups of people and the people themselves... glad to see someone, if only a fictional character, who has got that figured out.

This is very potent, very eloquent. *claps* A few things... firstly some technical stuff... Oh, mother, I am weeping Besides your doorway, should be "beside" Lips shaking silence Still I ...

p.s. You need to start refering to "The Bearer" as "Latent Heritage"... you need to get it out of that rut into another one so that it will become it's ...

This is amazing! I am in love with the names... particularly Ready and Distance. I'm pretty sure that when I have children you will be called upon for name suggestions. ...

Seriously, those two lines could be sold to a chocolateer. They are the stuff ads are made of... very lovely and very catchy. This is a cute little poem. The ...

Welcome, welcome. You'll love it here. Everyone is wonderful. And yes, the structure and organization are wondrous. :D

No one has replied to this? How can that be? I love it. I'm sad we missed their wedding though... any chance of a flashback?

Dusky, you are amazing. I don't know how you do it. But, you somehow manage to take in life and send back out a complex and detailed masterpiece of words ...