*singerofthenight*

ok, please don't say anymore. i think you just blew it for me. I wanted to read it for myself. hey haev you read breakign dawn?

Ok. Where am I?

Thanks. Yeah I sotra misspelled some words and I am planning to fix that. Like I said this is just a prologue and I'm still editing it. I just need ...

Yeah, ok. My names Jennie and welcome to YWS! If you need anything, just let me know.

*Ok. I've edited and edited, and I'm still not done, but I thought I'd post this so you couls tell me what you think, so I could edit some more ...

O_O. Wow. I can say nothing more. The one thing I noticed was that you didn't really....hmmm.....you didn't really care how long it was. It felt like it just flowed ...

OMG! Mable! When was your B-day? Man.....oh yeah love the horse, so adorable. Do you still have him/her? Your adorable.

ok heres mine Name: Shakira Sanderson Age: 18 (not that old..about 200 years old) Gender: female Appearance: ...hmmm...let me see....ill post it later. Red eyes, and silver hair. sorta like ...

Ok. That sort of clears it up for me. Thanks. :D

*we're still at the hotel, read my last post*

*who me? k.* *ill post mine monday b/c i have to go to my next class. i think we're the only ones in this stroybook now.*

Mary anne: Mary anne gasped as Ryder came back, carrying a small little girl in his arms. Her clothes were a little torn, and her face was dirty. "Oh my ...

Mary anne: Annie sighed. Stretching, she realized she was still curled up in Ryders lap. "Hey." She said looking up at him. "Hey." "I think we need to get up, ...

I do but not that much anymore. :D

"Poop." the baby said.