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Coey: She stared blankly at him for a moment, then heat rushed to her face. Seh lowered her head and a wide smile lit her face. He placed a finger ...

Coey: Coey slowly turned to face him. "Your already more interesting than the girls my fatehr introduced me to." She sighed. "Really?" he nodded. Her eyes roamed his face, taking ...

Sorry guys...this is just when I was starting out and I forgot to fix it! :(

I still can't find where I am.....Did you delete my profile? I said I was goign to post but I can't find it.....I'm Tabitha.

Peoples here are so pretty....I think I will not post mine.....I migh truin teh forum...:P

Is anybody going to post?

Thanks for the critiques! This will be newly edited soon!

Thanks for the critiques! This will be newly edited soon!

Thanks for the critiques! This will be newly edited soon!

Thanks for the advice! Chapter 3 is headed your way....and newly edited Chapter 1 and 2.....I'm still workign on the prologue though! :P

Bri watched the exchange between the two brothers. Seh sighed, turning away and headed towards her mother. Seh was not about to eb the subjject of gossip. A hand landed ...

Coey: She stopped, pausing in the middle of the dance. Charles must have sensed her unease, because he lead her away from the dance floor, toward the large double doors ...

Marcus wanted to snatch Leal away from that stranger. As he was backing away, he over heard a few words. A cold blooded killer.... Was he really? He stopped, leaning ...

Darko......that's a little harsh...don't you think? I thought it was pretty good....if your just starting..:) Ignore him....I think he's just grumpy. >> *Darko*

Prologue He was looking, searching for her. His obsession with her was to the point of terrifing. She crouched down lower into the darkness against the old pine. It was ...