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i get what your trying to say... i mean not every poem in the world is going to be the same...... there have got to be some poems showing some ...

beautiful...i wouldn't change a thing!

THAT was strong adn emotional, it makes me think of my sister...and wish she were here with me.....very good job....the reader can understand what the author is going through......i can ...

i thinnk its ok.....its really interesting ..... it gives me a feeling of......i dont know....come back to me later.....

well...i really liked it ...... im not to uptight with teh first person, second person thing.... doesnt really matter to long as i can understand the meaning im alright .....

im confused....what does fernatical mean?....uhhh.. :?

well.......i dont know what to was ok i guess....

:shock: i liked it.... it gives you this sort of ......hmmmm how do i put it....haunting feeling .... like somethings trying to .....ummm.... :? ... warn you i guess.. but ...

thanx.....guess whta my favorite animal is.......WOLVES i love em'.....just sayin....

thanks...that helped.... 8) well the poem really wasn't a rhyme poem it was more free verse i guess....i just write down what ever comes into my head and continue from ...

does any 1 know what im talking about?...help...

well i guess the message im tryin 2 give is ur going 2 have wounds no matter if they're good or bad. they can be graceful, but at the same ...

wounds bound in grace blood shattered and spilt tears, salty to taste dirt smeared, unkempt hair plastered emotional spiritual physical wounds scaring my life wounds wrapped in pain leaving behind ...

my heart aches, as i gaze up into your beautiful eyes. my heart skips a beat my face, flushed of all color. i stutter whispering your name, i think to ...

ur right, what is truth?......