*singerofthenight*

i didnt get it seemed like won of those really really small kiddy books to me....

As the day wore on, Sequoyah was quietly singing to herself, going about her daily chores. Slowly she knelt down on her knees to fill the bucket, letting her mind ...

ok i try to fix it....

i guess i can try...ummmmmmmmmmm................................... i am jennie, i am an elephant.......i walk along this boring lane, to skip a ton of boring trains. i pace around in circles i ...

nice...........

i can not even say what i was really good....i can't find really anything that id change........oh yeah thanx 4 the advice earlier!! :D

this is just chapter 1, it took awhile to write so let me know what you think.... The sun was silently rising over the mountains of El Paso, Mexico. Calm ...

thanks ill keep that in mind :D :shock: ohhh almost forgot...smile its friday!! 8)

Running around, inside of my head. Are things that are better left unsaid. Words are forgotten, and dreams are shed. But sugar plum daisies dance in my head. Spinning and ...

whoa.....fantatstic yet strong and deep....straight to the point ......bravodo!

well...i really liked it but your rhyming was a little off... :? but anywayz other than that, i didnt see anything wrong with it... :D

take it easy on her....i can relate to wha tshes talking can happen you know....

good poem.....but i dont get it..... :?

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

really liked it, gave me a feeling of suspense, like i know somethings about to happen but i dont know what it is...........