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Firstly, welcome to YWS! Hmm, is this a prologue? If so, I hope you don't mind me saying, it's not a good one. You don't draw me in at all ...

Hey! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic so I'm not sure if that's okay. There are seven chapters so far, I ...

Hi, again, sorry my first review didn't include much. I thought Makko’s perspective was really good, I liked that part, it really added some tension to the story and it ...

YWS has given me the confidence that I needed but never thought I'd get. I'm so glad I joined and I can't wait to see what the next few years ...

Hi, sorry for the late review, I've just been so busy with my own story. I like this but I think that the way you present your story given it ...

Hey, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I know it's quite long but I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. ...

Hey, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I know it's quite long but I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. ...

Hey Lauren, do you do romantic fiction? If so, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I'd love to hear what you think of it ...

Of Loss and Love: chapter seven Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] I lashed out at a ...

Thanks so much!

This is so great to read, you didn't overdo it but mentioned enough to leave me hooked. Please pm me the next chapter,I can't wait to read more! Bets of ...

This is brilliant! Not much to say apart from that :D

Hi, hope you'll find this comment useful! I think you need to work on your dialogue and present it in a different way because right now you're kind of cluttering ...

Thanks for the comments guys! I really appreciate it!

Hey Mo! Would you please look at Of Loss and Love for me, it's in the romantic section. Thank you so much!