*coco

Hey amy, it's me again :D I really appreciated your review. I was quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in ...

Everything that I was going to say has been said already. I'll just repeat how brilliant this story is, it's creepy and intriguing. I can't wait for more!

I really enjoyed reading this, you have incredible writing skills that I was hooked from the very first sentence. I envy how easily you seem to be able to describe ...

Hey, hippie! I came across this and thought I'd give you a good review. Hope this helps! Although there are loads of people doing the vampire thing, I liked this ...

Hey pink, it's me again :D I really appreciated your review. I was quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in ...

Hey classy, it's me again :D I really appreciated your review especially the link you put up called The Hero's Journey - although it did make me quite nervous to ...

Of Loss and Love: chapter nine Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] I left the banquet early ...

LOL! I love this! :lol:

Hey, Cassie! I like this, you've got a few little mistakes here and there but that's nothing that can't be fixed. Good job! I'm looking forward to reading more :D ...

I luuurve Assassin's Creed! Sorry lol, just thought I'd mention it! You were really brave for making an attempt to write a fanfic on it, it's quite difficult so I ...

Since all the nit-picks have been covered I'm gonna talk about how much I enjoyed reading this. The way you described the surroundings, the slow movements of the wolf, the ...

I'm gonna start with the nit-picks first. Sorry! I would recommend that you go back and edit this critically because you have a few mistakes here and there, but that's ...

I like this. Your narration is different but in a good way. You did have a bit of a problem with piling on a lot of information at times. My ...

I love this. I envy how beautifully you are able to describe the scenery, it's done wonderfully, so wonderfully that I can imagine being there and seeing and sensing everything ...

Since you've had some great reviews and ideas for improvement I'll just say how much I adore this story. You write so beautifully and I cannot wait for more! *coco