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Thanks so much guys. As usual your reviews were worth the wait :D

Hi Joe, Coco here! What can I say, this is absolutely AWSOME! Honestly, I could find nothing I didn't like. Each sentence, each paragraph just drew me in completely. I ...

Hey Explosive! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic. There are nine chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I ...

Hey mo! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. Thanks a million *coco chapter 10.

Hey pink! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. I'm kinda nervous to see what ...

Of Loss and Love: chapter ten Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] There was a collective intake ...

Hi, I'm coco, I'll be reviewing you today :D What I like about this is the idea, although it has been done before you seem to have an interesting take ...

The title intrigued me, I love it! This definitely has an assassin's creed vibe to it but without the arrogant al-tair. I'm liking Dracon, he's the typically obedient young assassin ...

Much better lol. Ok, now for my review. :arrow: the branches whipped my face and my exposed arms - i think it would flow better if you say: the branches ...

Hi Lydia! I'm not the best critique but I'll try my hardest! [takes a deep breath] You certainly built up tension well, I think the short sentences were a good ...

I really love this, it's brilliant. You write with such confidence, I can totally relate to your character because his emotions are so real and so true. The only problem ...

I know how you feel, not getting reviews can really bring you down and put you off writing. I think the problem with your story is not much is going ...

WOW! Umm, you really need to break your paragraphs up, especially the first one. When opening up a story you must be as gentle as possible in both your content ...

Thanks so much, guys! I really appreciate it!

Hey! You always give me such great reviews, I hope mine will be too :D Firstly, I just wanna say OMG, because I was so totally gonna do a story ...