*coco

So, no more school (Que the hallelujah music)! Anyway, since most people I know are out tanning in the Caribbeans while I'm stuck at home looking after the monsters that ...

This is really special: gritty, sharp and absolutely intriguing. It's been a while since I read a story that had no faults, you grabbed my attention from beginning to end ...

Hey, smexay, coco here for a review. I won't be too picky, I promise... must say, watching my mother rot in a mental hospital was pleasing. Only just thinking about ...

Oh, this is so lovely :D ! I have absolutely nothing else to say except I thought this piece was so wonderfully written and I can't wait to read more! ...

A rooster screeched and Nicolai coughed—a deep, lazily [to me 'lazily' sounds a little awkward. maybe you could have 'lazy' instead] furious sound that made him blink his eyes open. ...

Well I was beaten to review the improvements but I still wanted to comment because I absolutely loved what you've done with this! You've made some excellent changes to your ...

Hey Ofir! Coco here for chapter 5. I'm really glad that my reviews have helped so far, I'm hoping this one does to. The Party - Chapter Five The entire ...

Hey, River! Coco here for your first review. Hope this helps! The Time Capsule  By River Shields   It did not begin today but twelve years ago; it began with ...

Hi, Wheadee, coco here! I liked this, it was your typical American teenage story with some really great narration on the part of your character Bris, she sort of came ...

Ooooh, I lurve this! [scuse the spelling :D ] I'm excited already! *coco

Hello, Tianna! Welcome to YWS, I'm coco and I'll be reviewing you today :smt003 Okay, let's get started then, shall we? CHAPTER TWO Memories Are The Gates To The Soul ...

Hi, Attolia! Coco here for a review! Let me start off with what I loved about this. One word: characters. Madame Breton and Adele share some really great dialogue together, ...

Hey Evil, welcome to YWS! I'm coco and I'll be reviewing you today. Here goes... “Darren . . . ,” my mother croaked, kicking a blanket onto the floor as ...

Hey, Majic, welcome to YWS! Okay, so here's my mini review.... Dim light filtered into the tumble-down shed through a small, dusty window placed high on the wall opposite the ...

Hey DM, coco here! :smt003 Thanks for your email - can't wait for more of this story! *Coco