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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Faith (an excerpt)

    Hiya, Maddy! Invisible hug to you for requesting a review :D Although Rosalie beat me to it I'll try my best. Here goes: On the harsh, concrete floor I sit, ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Strawberry Liquorice Laces

    Oh, I absolutely love this. It reminded me of skittles sweets :smt003 I am officially a fan! *coco

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Distraught: Chapter 2

    Hiya Day, thanks for the email :D So you were right about this being uneventful, perhaps you could have broke it down with the point of view of the assassin ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Paid To Die

    I'm loving this - really gritty, just the kind of genre I love to read. I'm really excited to read more! *coco

    Jul 4, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Story of the dead

    Oh, wow this is so sad :( But really good too! I can't wait to read more! *coco

    Jul 3, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Button (12+ for war/violence themes)

    Hey there, Pandora! Well, I absolutely love this! Your writing has this wonderful flow that had me glued from the very first sentence. I'm really looking forward to reading more ...

    Jul 3, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The McBride's: Generations whisper Chapter1

    I like this, it's got a bit of a Vampire Diaries feel to it but with a twist. The only thing I'd suggest is to work on some of your ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Sick (Critique more than welcome!)

    Hey, WhiteRoses! Coco here for a review. I hope I can help! Rated for blood, violence, language, zombie horror, and some disturbing scenes [*rubs hands in excitement*] . No nudity ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Regret Letters (formally know as Eliza and Morgan)

    Wow, Gabriella, this was sooooo good! Really scary and different. I can't wait for more! :D *coco

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Title Why Not. Chapter 3: A Night Or Rather Morning Out

    Hiya, Tigz, here I am, as promised! Hopefully this helps! Samantha Ah finally those new albums and bands are noted down I think to myself as I sit back in ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Singer- Chapter 1

    So I haven't read the prologue BUT I enjoyed this. I read 'King Uther' and had wonderful images of the BBC series Merlin, I don't know if you've heard of ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Title: Why Not. Chapter 2: Just A Regular Day part 2

    So it looks like you've already got one great review. I agree with a lot of what she said, especially regarding the emotions and the plot. You need to go ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter Four

    Brilliant, as always! Yay with the end, I was looking forward to reading more about Francois Despard. Good job, Attolia! *coco

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Sacrifice

    OMG, this is so sad - really good but really sad. You've got a few awkward sentences in the beginning but apart from that I loved it and I can't ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring it on! (Open)

    Hiya, shubhi :D I'd really appreciate a review of my novel, it's a romantic and although I put it up a while ago and had people review it, I've made ...

    Jun 29, 2010


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