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Hiya, Diane! “You know them?” I asked. They were not the kind of people I imagined as Dad’s friends. PTA parents, soccer moms, and sleepy night-shift interns seemed like they ...

Hiya, Diane! Coco here again, as requested! I pushed the whiny thoughts from my head - don't think whiny is the right word I think 'whiny' is the wrong word. ...

Hiya, Diane! Coco here again, for part 2! Just a few pointers since you've already been given reviews. Bare in mind these are just my opinions on improvements, you can ...

Hiya, Diane! Coco here again for chapter two. Again, I hardly have anything to critique. :( It's just so perfect the way it is. My two most favourite lines: Sometimes ...

Hiya, Diane! Coco here, as requested! Since you already have some great reviews, I'll just talk about what I loved about this piece. I loved it, I mean, I was ...

Chapter 3 The Dinner Party The next day Ian awoke around noon as usual, he pulled himself out of bed, and got ready for the day by going about his ...

Sionarama - you didn't put up a link! :( Diane - I'll be starting yours soon :D Gunta - your's is complete. Thanks for the request :smt003

Hiya, Gunta! Interesting name :D Coco here, as requested. I'm hoping this will be helpful. They exchange farewells under the passing gaze of a flickering street lamp. Zipping his jacket, ...

So, I've NEVER and I mean it when I say NEVER wrote a poem before...EVER! But, I'm feeling a little perky and daring so I thought, what the heck, I'll ...

This was great, suspenseful and fun to read because I felt like I was there and involved which made it all the more exciting to read. Apart from what Enigma ...

Hiya, Robin! Coco here to review, hope that's ok? Firstly, welcome to YWS! Secondly, I was totally drawn to read this by the title - Hitman - it could only ...

Bartimaeus was a character that was just so refreshing to read. I mean, it was really clever, witty, and the way he bonded with Kitty was just really sweet. My ...

Ends of the Earth? Stupid, I know, I just thought of sci-fi and...you know...planet Earth, and how you would go to the ends of the earth for a person you ...

Same as Hydey, I'm having SUCH a hard time finishing my novel which is really sad because 1) I love it and I want to see it finished, 2) I ...

Hiya, Sophie! Coco here, hopefully I can help. All writer's are different. I'm the kind of writer who jumps with the very first idea I get and the very first ...