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LUCAN MERCER Familiars cued outside club Inferno waiting to get inside. Three armed beefy bouncers (clearly Familiars too) stood outside the entrance to the club; two guarding the doors while ...

Something’s definitely up. Eric couldn’t help but just stare at her the whole time she talked. Whenever she'd throw her head back to laugh, whenever she’d glance up at him ...

I really enjoyed this poem. You create a wonderful visual experience with the earthy descriptions of the trees and the mountains and the soil and then a heavenly visual experience ...

Thanks for the review request. Hope this helps “I’m not going! You can’t make me!” Elaine’s protests echoed in the tiny room we were ushered into the day before. My ...

That pretty smile...Eric almost got lost in it and it was only when the bad boy still inside him told him to suck it up, did he manage to get ...

LUCAN MERCER This whole situation sucked beyond understanding. On the one hand I had Lucifer and my so-called dad on mine and Caleb’s tail, and on the other hand there ...

Eric watched with clenched jaws while Mrs Bing ran through lines with Melody and the piece of scum, all the while resisting the urge to knock the life out of ...

There was no denying the air of smugness in Jeffery’s voice. Eric wanted to kick his...never mind. He couldn’t anyway, even if he wanted to. Not now at least. Melody ...

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Eric stormed backstage looking for the exit so he could cool off. He was so angry he wanted to punch something or someone. Jeffery... that son of a - his ...

It took a while for Eric to let off steam after his dad left the hospital. He still couldn’t believe how his old man was treating him, like he was ...

The first person to show up at the hospital the next day was Eric’s step-mom. “Thank the Lord you’re alright!” she breathed when she saw him. “Oh, everyone was so ...

I think its okay so far, just your basic prologue, I'm not sure where you can take it from there because the possibilities are endless really depending on the genre ...

Eric had always hated hospitals. Sure, playing football all these years, he’d managed to land himself in the hospital a few times for gashes and maybe some broken bones but ...

Man, I’m good. To say that Eric was pleased with himself would be an understatement. Tonight couldn’t have gone more smooth even if he tried. Eric was on cloud nine. ...