*Twilight*

This was written very well, not once was I lost in the description. You used simple words that were successful in describing the situation without confusing the readers. I also ...

The story is still as intruguing as before. The way you created the suspense of discovering more about mersey is well done. You kind of gave a hint of his ...

But Nate, what if that thing draws the attention from the other thing and that thing becomes a usless thing that nobody cares about?

Granted but then scientists catch you in a butterfly net and do painful experiments to see how magic works. I wish I had a pet dragon. (I can just see ...

Well.....Shame on you for making me look like a fool. I honestly don't know what era it is set in there are no key words to make it obvious. Either ...

Snoink,......How dare you!? *cries* I loved goosebumps when I was younger. That was the series that got me interested in reading. But I guess that was a long time ago........Oh ...

Well, I guess maybe in the morning early in the morning.

TPBM drinks out of the toilet.

I want doughnuts too!!! Anyway welcome to the yws! :D My team of conga dancing elephants and I will be glad to welcome you with a portrayal of "Cats" the ...

I agree with torpid it was original and intruguing. The thing that kept me reading was to find out who the Boatman was. This mysterious figure kept the story interesting ...

This was hard read as one big chunk of text, try breaking it up into smaller paragraphs that will make it a lot better. As for the story, it was ...

9/10 He's a knight and some knights tame dragons....and I love dragons!!!! Emma- High fives back, I love it too!!! :mrgreen:

Granted but the plane is abducted by aliens and they replace your head with a dog's. I wish I could fly.

8/10 I love dragons what can I say?

I wish dog poop would pick itself up. (My dog poops too much)