*Twilight*

Yeah I guess if you put it that way........

Well if they want fresh air and a good time then they can go on hikes. But, the fact that you said that they have a good time doing it ...

The dsecription was good but what was the purpose of this piece? Was it to introduce your character? Because I could not see one little hint of what the plot ...

It dosen't look like it but, he might.

I agree with Jigsaw, you are a talented writer for your age. Are you sure that you arent a 45-year-old in disguise? Anyway, I think you did an exelent job ...

Good, because this is a story I am interested in reading.

Or maybe YWS could use it to gather a collection of our wonderful stories... just a thought Now theres an idea!

Fox Hounds are a working dog, why cant they keep as pets? Who the hell wants about 25 fox hounds to KEEP, FEED etc... It costs money which no average ...

It would be really cool if the YWS had a tool that highlights text. That way when we are reading stories we can highlight the mistakes we find. So, when ...

Yeah, I wouldn't use it for something really big, but if you've got some little thing that you don't think will get published by a big publisher and want to ...

So, when is pt 3 coming anyway?

You make a good point, humans are destroying the animal's habitats. I agree with everything you said in the story but all of this was just the begenning. I live ...

This would actually make a good picture book for children. The worlds have many colors and lots of things to see so there would be plenty to draw. The whole ...

Congradulations Adam! Or Rat-boy! Okay I won't call you that.

This is still as good as the last one you are getting really good at describing battles. I know I said this last time but I also really like your ...