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You can't move it one of the moderators have to do that. When they see it they will move it.

I was just curious...(did you see me huh huh????) I just saw somebody named Green monkey and Lil KeKe.

8/10 I saw that on a long time ago...I guess funny pictures spread around the internet pretty fast.

Posts like these belong in randomness. So, this will be moved pretty soon.

Welcome HereAndNow! If you need someone to crit your story just pm me. I always have time to spare.

Yes, if you want your story to to really get a reader's attention try including more than just one paragraph.

The description was good I was able to picture a decent amount of details in my head. At the start I thought they were exploring an old abandoned house but ...

Yes, this one is better but you still need to include more description of the dwarf's surroundings. After having this flashback Gerhart stepped up onto a boulder and replied “If ...

Well, I can't wait to see some of your work. :D

Welcome!!! If you need any help or if you want somebody to crit your story just send me a pm and five bucks. (Just kidding....about the money thing.)

Only one thing stood between me and the approaching Caterpillar . My sword. I tried to slice the evil thing but it was two small I missed every time, I ...

You did a pretty good job describing the battles. I could picture it in my mind very well but, the thing is you didn't describe the scenery so I had ...

Great inking job! I would also like to know what kind of pen you used. I've been practicing inking here lately.

Hmmm......that too.

So far the writing isn't bad but, it is always better to post many long paragraphs of your story at first to grab your reader and get them interested. So ...