*DaughteroftheMoon*

I have remembered to half forget, That saying that so loud leaves one a target. For yelling, and hitting, or simply ones bidding, To catch you off guard while you're ...

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Imagery: You have some really good imagery in this poem. And some really good metaphors. You are definately not lacking in that department. Your inagery makes the poem even more ...

Okay, there is too much repitition in this poem. I really don't like it. I would suggest that you change the sentance structure. It makes the poem extremely boring. I ...

This gave me a laugh and was quite true. Although, I wouldn't imagine anyone really giving this a review. If you want a line by line of course and you ...

I had to read Lord of the Flies as a class project too, and have to create a wiki page for it as my project. I think that you have ...

I'm sorry to say this but I read the first five pages and all the while thinking this was a scene that I could read out directly from Twilight. I ...

When I was reading your poem, I noticed that a few lines seemed cliche to me. Hopefully you know what I am talking about? This rain cloud over my head ...

Demeter, I can't see your picture! My stupid computer isn't letting it come up. *sighs* I guess you'll always look like a cartoon to me. :)

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Thanks for the material, you have a review waiting for you on your poem! So anyone else??

Slowly nestling against white fluff. A flash of icicles. Or maybe they were claws? No Kilimanjaro this time – the heat of Savannah is too far away. But maybe after ...

First Photo: The first one was good, nothing out of this world about it, but it was good. Especially when you are taking it with a simple camera. I like ...