*DaughteroftheMoon*

Haha, I don't think that this is exactly radio material. Thanks for the reviews though.

Welcome to YWS! Ah, there are art and writing forums all around here. I keep trying to check out Vampire Kisses, but they always seem to be out Arg. I'll ...

I will try to help this poem. It was as said before murdered with the redundancy. It became difficult to read and, well it messes majorly with the flow of ...

INteresting username! Let me introduce you to the best site ever! I'm already obsessed. I also love to draw. I was considering that as a career, until I found that ...

Hello. Incoming freshman. :) I'm an upcoming senior. *smiles evilly* No, but welcome. I ffound high school alot easier than middle school. Please forgive all the typos. I'm on an ...

Okay, as i was reading it I also got the same impression. This is a cliche, love you so much, I hope we get another chance poem. Its teenage love ...

This to me, looks more like lyrics. In fact I think taht it would be better as a song. I do think that you could add some more imagery and ...

Okay so heres your review: Diction: This cursed side of me I hate so bad. For me in this state is sad. Try not to use words like bad and ...

Hi there *waves enthusiastically* Yea ,another fantasy fiction person. Have you read Inkheart? Its about a daughter and a father who can read things out of books, and even later ...

Thanks or your review! Yeah, I see that they are a bit to straightfoward in some places. I'll try to edit it out...when I ever get time. :)

Could you please review this? Its lyrics. My first attempt.

Title: Blessing and a Curse Genre: Lyrics Link:

Hiya there! We wont shun you for naming a site. :) Anyways, its great to see that you are on YWS. Its really a great place to improve your writing. ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! If you love to read and write you have the same passions as most of the people on this site, including me. Just remember to ...

Thank you for the review! I was wondering if anyone would ever review it. I see what you mean and I'll fix it right up. :)