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Re: baby brother
This is a rough draft and I need much help. Please tear it apart if it helps. I don't mean to put punctuation here. Its no purpose. your sweet face ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: For your Convenience
Rascallover, your review is done. Hope it helps, good luck. Moving to the others now.
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Hello All
Welcome to the family of YWS! Haha, I'm also a junior that writes lyrics, although I havent been in a band. :) And working on a novel! I can't wait ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Prologue: Here Comes Goodbye
Here is the review you asked for. :) Characters: We the readers can get most of Maria's emotion, but I would like to see more of Jon Doe's side and ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: For your Convenience
Alright I'll get right to it. Anyone else feel like they need a story to be reviewed.
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Hiiiiiiii. =]
The Singing is a great book! I have read it already! Anyways, welcome to YWS and I'm happy that you like it! So everyone has already explained the rules, (I ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Life in General
It is actually, to Icarius and his son. You're the first one to notice. :)
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: For your Convenience
Please read the guidelines. Alright, so here's the deal. I'm open 24/7 to review your works. I'll have it done in at the most two days (and that's if there ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment
Hey, could you please review these for me. *shows a twenty* I'll pay you for good work. *wink, wink* Both are other poetry. Is life a breeze? Moonlit Beach
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: A Blessing and Curse.
*Edited*
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Moonlite Beach
The waves mighty roar Crash upon the ocean shore, Easy breezes blow by softly, Water caresses against the skin Moonlight shines below so gently Footsteps make an impression, Along the ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Rules don't exist
I don't think its true, yet of course it may be since truths are just truths to those whom believe I like these lines for some odd reason. They drew ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Hellooooo
Welcome here to YWS! So what is your favorite to write? Short stories?Poetry? or maybe Lyrics? There are some contests, look in the contests forums, although often its points and ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Newbie!
Ahoy there. Welcome to YWS! I also have a dozen stories sitting on my computer, beggin to be finished. So the rules have been mostly covered. If you ever need ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: NEW to website
Hey there. I also mostly write short stories and poetry. And dabble a bit in lyrics. It seems as though you have caught on. Feel free to PM me if ...
Jan 20, 2009