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Re: Hiya
Welcome to the nuthouse...I mean YWS! So tell us a little about yourself, whats your favorite books to read? So just a few rules, minimize the chatspeak and keep a ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hello !
Hello there! So random episodes for Family Guy huh? I have watched a few... So when you do write,, is it poetry, or short stories, or novels? If you ever ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: hey
Welcome to the great big family! I love history writings, and I'll be sure to check yours out. Historic fiction is great. Hey, don't worry, on YWS you will get ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: What is Success?
Hey there. I liked, no loved the idea of your poem. Although I think it could use some improvement. I would suggest that you take a few never's out. A ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: What a Gymnast!
What a Gymnast Kaylyn Stout Roundoff Backhandspring Tuck, Such a beautiful combination To be such a great gymnast, Takes a lot of determination. I admire your strength, As you mount ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: To My Bases
To My Bases Kaylyn Stout Bases, I have to say I owe the stunt to you, Even when you’re tired You always make it through. You keep the flyer in ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Dear Flyer
Dear Flyer Kaylyn Stout I admire your determination, To stay in the air. It certainly takes courage, To trust me with your care. The least I can do, Is catch ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: ahh
Hey there! I know, I'm late. So, tell us about yourself, who is your favorite author? So all the rules have been covered. Writing well, It's great. So if you ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Hand
... I like these first lines, they drew me in, although, I suggest that you shorten up the last line in this stanza, its way longer than the first few ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Hey from the Cullens
Hey there! I also love twilight, all the books...I'm not obsessed...Well just a little. Nessie is one of my favorite characters. So all the rules have been covered, and I ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Hi!
Well, hello there, welcome to the great big family of YWS! So the rules have been covered so I get the fun part. What is your favorite color? How long ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: baby brother
Thanks for the review Sofi, although, I didn't capitilize and put in grammar on purpose. Its one of those poems without the grammar. Thanks again for taking the time to ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: My Little Flare
Okay, okay, so here is my poetry: Tear it apart, it needs it. Such a rough draft. Thanks, ~Alyss
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Hi I'm New
I love horses! Wow, already have finished a novel. *mutters* lucky. I have been trying to finish one, but have contracted a deadly disease, WB aka Writers Block. So a ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: My Intro!
Welcome to the great big family! Cool! I'm also 16, and am attempting to write a story. Key word: Attempting. Yours has better luck than me, to be already on ...
Jan 26, 2009
