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Re: -poofs in- Come Meet Me, I'm a Lot of Fun!
Welcome to YWS! Its great to see that you love animals so much. To what degree vegetarian are you? Do you eat eggs or drink milk or just stay away ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Elven Kiss
Sentance Structure: I think that you could rearrange your sentance structure. Alot of the sentances began with she did this and she did that. It would make much more interesting ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Words
A first poem huh? I'll try not to be to harsh. mwa ha ha.... Okay so first off I would suggest splitting some of your lines up. Alot of them ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Will review...
Thanks!
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]
Lyrics
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Hei everyone
Another Twilight fan? I'm one too. Harry Potter also had me reading when I was younger. SO it looks as if all or at least most of the rules have ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: What a Gymnast!
I actually wrote this for little kids in fact. It's for the YMCA Gymnastics. Thanks for the reviews, and the time you all took to read them.
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Uglies Series
I never realized it was in Japan...until now. So Your not the only one. But I didn't like extras compared to the other books, and I loved Tally's point of ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Oh, herrow there!
Ah yes, Kylan is a very good reviewer. I had a few done by him they were great. Also quite a good writer... So anyways, I'm welcoming you! I hope ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Seasons
Rhythm: I don't think that your rhythm is all to consistant in this poem. I would suggest that for this to be better that you quit repeating Tis the saeson, ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: I Am Me
I had just gotten done with a thirty minute review on yours when my computer shut down, so, I will attempt to recall from memory what I wrote down the ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Forever and Always
Dedicated to my dad.....Please fell free to rip it apart. I want it to be good. You’re my best friend; you have always been there for me. From little league ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: I'm new...sort of
Hello sorta new person, :) welcome (kinda) to YWS. Even though you say that you have been here, I haven't seen you around, but thats nothing. Just just don't use ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Calling Your Name Again
Alrighty now, here goes your review! The idea of the poem has very much potential. I think that if you extended it, it would be alot better. But basically you ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Hello, First poem!
Okay when you post lengthy poems like this try to post them seperate. Shower Poem: I tihnk the beat was off just a tad bit. I also think that you ...
Feb 2, 2009