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*DaughteroftheMoon*

  • Other Poetry Re: Books

    Thanks Galerius, I can always count on you for a good and honest review.

    Jan 8, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: nvm 6

    I’m insecure Disgusted by my reflection Like there are a million Razor blades piercing my skin I’m selfish and unworthy My face is shattered As my bones are broken I’m ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Sister child

    She is my phoenix, rising from the ashes of an old year, ak past life, a neglected child. She There are some spelling mistakes here. ak should probably be a. ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Mostly Here to Critique

    Welcome there! I love the username. So you're a freshman in college. That's great! I'm still a bit scared about what comes next for me after high school. And the ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Books

    You’re always there for me, Ready to take me back, No matter how long I neglect you, You sit there in a stack. You line my shelves in a disarrayed ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Innocently Guilty

    Salem, Massachusetts November 5, 1692 The Salem Witch Trials. Interesting, its a time that I have studied into. Branches whipped her face, arms and legs as she ran. The roughened, ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I would rather...

    This poem is really short. I get the jest of it, but I think that you could develop this a bit more. You're basically saying the same message every line. ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Tissue For Your Tears?

    You have some great rhythm and flow in this poem. There were a few spelling mistakes that have already been mentioned. I care for you tirelessly When sickness siezes; For ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Ghosts of Time

    Okay, here goes. You could write this poem with stanzas or you could keep it the way you have it. Either way its your choice and it works. Its could ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Aloha, Konichiwa, Hola

    You can call me Alyss. I love the Alainna set. Something did in fact inspire my username. It was a set of books that I read. The series is called ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Aloha, Konichiwa, Hola

    Hi there! My name's Alyss, and I love to read and write. (apparently) I am also into any type of competitive sport. Right now I'm on a competition cheerleading squad. ...

    Jan 6, 2009


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