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Re: Books
Thanks Galerius, I can always count on you for a good and honest review.
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: nvm 6
I’m insecure Disgusted by my reflection Like there are a million Razor blades piercing my skin I’m selfish and unworthy My face is shattered As my bones are broken I’m ...
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Re: Sister child
She is my phoenix, rising from the ashes of an old year, ak past life, a neglected child. She There are some spelling mistakes here. ak should probably be a. ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Mostly Here to Critique
Welcome there! I love the username. So you're a freshman in college. That's great! I'm still a bit scared about what comes next for me after high school. And the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Books
You’re always there for me, Ready to take me back, No matter how long I neglect you, You sit there in a stack. You line my shelves in a disarrayed ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Innocently Guilty
Salem, Massachusetts November 5, 1692 The Salem Witch Trials. Interesting, its a time that I have studied into. Branches whipped her face, arms and legs as she ran. The roughened, ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: I would rather...
This poem is really short. I get the jest of it, but I think that you could develop this a bit more. You're basically saying the same message every line. ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Tissue For Your Tears?
You have some great rhythm and flow in this poem. There were a few spelling mistakes that have already been mentioned. I care for you tirelessly When sickness siezes; For ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Ghosts of Time
Okay, here goes. You could write this poem with stanzas or you could keep it the way you have it. Either way its your choice and it works. Its could ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Aloha, Konichiwa, Hola
You can call me Alyss. I love the Alainna set. Something did in fact inspire my username. It was a set of books that I read. The series is called ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Aloha, Konichiwa, Hola
Hi there! My name's Alyss, and I love to read and write. (apparently) I am also into any type of competitive sport. Right now I'm on a competition cheerleading squad. ...
Jan 6, 2009
