*DaughteroftheMoon*

in the putrid depths of the garbage can heavy on its mind. On this last line did you mean to say weigh heavy on it's mind? Because wrote this way, ...

He wants to escape, From his prison walls. To him, freedom calls He struggles to gain, A new set of wings. He flies to low, even now As he tries ...

I woke up. I rose from my uncomfortable hay bed, and eyed my surroundings with interest. The first thing I noticed was a small, intricate carving of a wolf's head ...

I can see that you have made it to the insane asylum *coughs* I mean YWS! Oh I've seen Sukura around the site. Its nice to see you here as ...

A child dancing in the moonlight singing praises to the sky tracing through the forest she stops, smells the flowers sees beauty in new life she marvels at nature and ...

The darkness came, passed and went away This is a listy sort of sentance. You list that the darkness did all sorts of things. I would suggest that you either ...

They were on the road, Just ready to get home. It was late at night On June 26, 1991 They never saw the light, Heading from the other side. The ...

Friends just for now, friends to the end. Friends take a vow, and try to comprehend. Okay the lines sound force. Like your making them ryhme, even if they don't ...

The teachings of life Aren't lessons taught, With spoken words And written lines. The wisdom gained With every wilted hope, Every promise broken, Every fallen dream. The unwritten words Read ...

dont be afraid my dear i am here dont cry dont bleed i swear it ill die! take heed my warning it only helps the dead there is... blood running ...

Thanks for the greetings!

Hello, no I promise its not an insane asylum... *hears scream* Its just cases of writers block is all thats wrong. :) Nice to have you at YWS! Its always ...

Adnamarine, I love Josh Groban... Oh right, back to topic. :) Welcome to YWS! I also loved my MP3, notice I used past tense. It kicked the bucket, died, whatever ...

What now? I've always come to expect another bruise, Whenever you show up. What are you going to use this time? Your fist? foot? or the bat? The last line ...

Mothers do the hard jobs, While fathers clean and sew. Little brothers do the singing, I hope that this is something you now know. I think that this last line ...