*DaughteroftheMoon*

First off, I have to say, that I find this poem is quite cliched. The whole idea of it anyways. You didn't force this poem to rhyme which is great, ...

Characters: When reading this story, your character seemed a bit robotic. There was really no emotion to them. Nothing that makes me attached to them, or feel sympathy. I want ...

Someone out there has to want reviews...

I had a few nickpicky line that I thought could have been worded better. Here they are: The blood is dry and it sometimes falls off in flakes. It could ...

There are guidelines of course. I WILL REVIEW: Poetry Fantasy Fiction Romance Fiction Science Fiction Historic Fiction Other Fiction Adventure/Action Fiction Art and Photography WILL NOT REVIEW: Lyric

Alright then, it sounds as if you forced some of the rhymes, justa reminder that all poems don't have to rhyme, but it is nice when they do. Some of ...

Oh, that was filled with emotion. I almost cried when I read it. *sniffles* Great job. I couldn't find any grammar errors. It was sweet and filled with imagery. bravo ...

*hits not twilight fans with sticks* just kidding. Welcome deedee! Glad to see that you found this site. *whispers* Just stay away from the crazy people, they're dangerous. :) I ...

All was quiet. The velvet night was heavy, suffocating to all those who dared walk within it. Clouds crept across the sky, straining to wade their way through the thick ...

The chin isn't quite right in this drawing. You need to make it less angular for a female especially. Her right arm does look like it's cut off going into ...

Welcome to the place known as YWS! There are many crazy people around here... you don't even have to look for them. In fact there are some crazy people who ...

Characters: Your characters to me seem a bit robotic. The dialogue between them especially are unrealistic. “I think that I’m going to go dance with that beautiful girl over there,” ...

So difficult I have so many... Nothing by Author Unknown After a battle lasting many ages, The Devil won, And he said to God (who had been his Maker): “Lord, ...

Welcome to YWS! I just got back from one of the poetry forums, and I have already read some of your poems. They are filled with promise. Poetry is an ...

This poem was riddled with questions. You went from idea to idea, and it reminded me of someone that is ADD(that would me me.) and sees something shiny. *coughs*First of ...