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Hey, i would love to be reviewed. I'm not that great of a writer (im not told this, i believe it though.) so i'm always looking for help. Could you ...

Really great, I love this. I was 15 I visited a boy It was a bit hard to realize thta she visited a boy that lived there, so i would ...

Hello. The man stood up and walked toward her. Pandora wrapped her self tightly in the unfamiliar blanket. The man stared at her with a it of a smile. Her ...

After dinner was over, it was already started to get dark. Instead of staying and just writing in my notebook all night, it would probably be fun to go out ...

Yeah, so I’d just wished that I didn’t have to ride the school bus. I didn’t want it to happen like this! I’d rather sit on the school bus than ...

This story is amazing. I can't wait to read more about it. there arguments Wouldn't this be "their"? It makes me sad because they always have me hopeful, I mean ...

Brilliant. I really love this. You have such great talent, and I'm not even kidding :elephant: . (But your awesome-er than the dancing-purple-elephant) Keep writing!!!!!!!

Once again, I really like this, but I think it is short. You did really good this time, getting us into Leila's head. The picture of Ella and Allen, embracing ...

I really, really like this. I will totally be looking for the rest of it. You are a great writer, but there is only one thing that I want to ...

Thanks so much for the feedback, and for pointing out my careless mistakes!!! I fixed them, so I'm hoping that it's getting better! And, oh, I haven't finished it yet, ...

So, it's been a while since I've written. I had this idea a while ago, so i hope you like it. Please review? In her room, the girl was scratching ...

I like this alot. I think your style of writing is really unique, and that the story is very different--everything from the idea to the way it's written. A few ...

So, it's been a while since I wrote this, but I thought it was O.K. A little feedback, please? I hoped this day would never come, but here it is. ...

I really, really like this. No joke, it is one of my most favorites. There is only one eeensy weensy thing that is bugging me (but a lot of random ...

Heyy!! So I really, really like this. I love the way you write (your writing style, I guess) I totally love this, but there are a few things i want ...