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  • khushi17bansal I have this urge to replace kill with eat....
    22 hours ago


    khushi17bansal Don't freak out, I have context.

    My english teacher always used this sentence to teach us the importance of commas - "I want to eat, Mom!" - always cracked me up.....

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  • Spearmint XD #RavenIsAReallyWonderfulWriter :D
    15 hours ago

  • Something weird I picked up! So I don't really listen to stuff about Hollywood and actors and whatnot, but in my little gamer space, I overheard this clip with Jack Black talking about the Minecraft movie trailer (this is JUST about what he said, I'm not bashing the movie itself I promise! XD)

    He said they didn't want to make the Minecraft characters look like Minecraft characters because "you need to see real humans to connect to the story." And as soon as I heard that, I thought of a million fallacies, but in this context: if nobody can connect to media without real humans, then how did Minecraft become the most popular game worldwide to begin with?? And how did Steve and Alex become so iconic with their own merch, legos, Smash Bros character, etc?? Is it just me, or is that kind of like saying nobody really "connects" to the classic Creeper, so they should make it a hyper-realistic cockatrice instead??

    Again, not saying anything about the movie itself, but that clip had me thinking...longer than I would've liked XD Am I crazy??


    LadyMysterio ooh thats very interesting.
    Sep 15, 2024


    goodolnoah Don't even get me STARTED on the Minecraft movie!!! I like Jack Black but I don't think he's trying to do anything crazy. I think he just wanted to have as much fun with the movie as he can.

    I plan on skipping out on the movie unless I have some friends who want to go see it lol. I guess we don't know much but the trailer did not give me high hopes

    Sep 15, 2024

  • I have a fun, spooky question for everybody because I am very curious after noticing an intriguing pattern in my own list!

    Spoiler! :
    What are your top 3-5 scariest movie monsters? Not just how much the movie itself scares you, but what the monsters themselves do to you when they appear on screen? Is there a pattern between them?

    My ranking was...

    5: Samara Morgan (The Ring)

    4: Crooked Man (The Conjuring 2)

    3: Diana (Lights Out)

    2: Kayako Saeki (The Grudge)

    And one I feel is underappreciated...

    1: Mama (Guillermo Del Toro)

    I guess I'm most scared of the onryo-class monsters, or just distorted humanoid forms with unsettling noises O.O


    Ley The Nun >.> scares me every time
    Sep 14, 2024


    RavenAkuma Ooo, yeah, that's a creepy one!!
    Sep 15, 2024

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  • LuminescentAnt
    Sep 14, 2024

    The ring!!!!!!!!


    RavenAkuma Yesss!!! :D
    Sep 14, 2024

  • Seven Days...



    Spoiler! :
    Seven Days is actually a goal of my own for something, but still, I expect the replies to contain more quotes from this movie >:D


    Moonlily this isn't threatening at all Raven. I guess I should repost this comment it's close enough to copying it lol.
    Sep 13, 2024


    Kaia
    Spoiler! :
    I don't understand the reference, but now I'm worried because I take NCLEX in literally 7 days from the day you sent this message. Should I be concerned....

    Sep 14, 2024

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  • I am not going to do another RP anytime soon (there are too many I want to focus on already XDD) But I had some ideas I'd be interested in sharing as a sort of uh...(I swear there's a better word for this but I'm drawing a blank on it, so I'm just gonna say "trial run" XDD)

    Spoiler! :
    A TFR-Themed Mission: This would take place in my dark fantasy universe, where terrifying beasts roam freely, a plague of mutant monsters are tormenting the world, and tribes stand divided in a constant state of strife.

    [REDACTED]: This could double as a little trial-run of my not-very-secret secret project! In a sci-fantasy world, a member of each land (Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Horus, Neptune) are thrown together by an underground organization looking to attack and usurp the Emperor.

    The prior two would be intense and elaborate, buuuuut by extension, there would be a lot of lore and may just be too much for some people so I'm not sure...My other ideas are pretty much all videogame-related because I thought a little collaborative fanfiction would be AWESOME:

    Zelda Roleplay: This would be a Zelda-themed world with some elements of the games I know best (Skyward Sword, Ocarina of Time, Majora's Mask, Twilight Princess, Wind Waker) and would likely break some lore because of it (but it's all for fun anyway!). I thought our team could feature a Hylian, Kokiri, Korok, Goron, Rito, Zora, Twili, and "Loftian" (someone from Skyloft).

    Five Nights At Freddy's Roleplay: Picking up on Security Breach lore, our characters awaken as backstage, concept, abandoned, or even scrapped animatronics and find a child trying to investigate what happened at the Pizzaplex, including the disappearance of several children, the main cast, and Gregory and Cassie. This leads us through some interesting ruins...

    Corpse Party [Horror] Roleplay: So even if you're not totally familiar with Corpse Party games or anime, I think its concept would make an awesome spooky roleplay! We're just a group of high school kids (plus maybe one teacher or other staff member), and when we perform an occult charm wrong, we are transported to a decrepit old elementary school filled with violent ghosts and a bloody history. Our only chance at survival is to appease the ghosts that wander here (WARNING: this story, in corpse party fashion, would probably be very gory and reference some very dark lore)

    Bendy Roleplay: Last but not least, Bendy and The Ink Machine! After escaping the ink dimension, Audrey and her mysterious mascot, Bendy, have strived to make the ink dimension a better place for those trapped inside. But someone working under her has been corrupted --now Audrey is missing, and mysterious things are happening around Joey Drew Studios. Our characters -animators working for Audrey- find cryptic instructions to turn on the ink machine and cross over to the ink dimension, where we traverse as distorted cartoon characters in our own time, looking for answers until we find each other and put the pieces together...


    JazzicusMaximus If you create a Bendy RP I will join >.>
    Sep 13, 2024


    DeadMenTe11N0Tales I'd be up to a corpse party rp
    Sep 13, 2024

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  • *sigh* mini rant incoming...

    Spoiler! :
    It's not even ten-thirty and a know-it-all 16-year-old has come in and started chatting with me nonstop, and my coworker decided to chip in and fuel the fire until she *VERY patronizingly* asked me why I would EVER move here, since I must be crazy or stupid to leave California...

    My response in spirit: "Okay, child that apparently knows more about this subject than I do. Would you like me to talk about my former cost of living, how "the state" handled the maternal half of my family, or the risk of being swallowed by an inferno every summer? Is that a valid enough reason for you to approve of me coming here??"

    No shade to Californians, that was from my own experience, but it was the ATTITUDE on this girl! I literally told her, "I mean, part of why we left was that we couldn't afford to live there anymore, it's incredibly expensive." And she just looks at me with this sneering expression and says, "No it's not."

    B**** ARE YOU CALLING ME POOR OR A LIAR??!!

    Then she goes on to explain some political psychobabble I just wind up tuning out, until...Well, I'm not getting off into the weeds here, but imagine literally the most obvious possible questions while actively just saying "oh that stuff that happened to you doesn't actually happen." And the one issue I will be vocal about, the treatment of foster children, she literally just said "that's not really a problem you know, there are WAY more important things than THAT." Oh, how I smiled and nodded, but how I wanted to curse her out...

    Thank god, she left a while ago, but am I crazy?? Do I give off some kind of "dumb" aura I wasn't aware of?? Half of me is laughing at the whole thing, but the other half is still kinda fuming, not gonna lie...


    khushi17bansal oof that sounds horrible, sorry you had to go through that <3
    Sep 12, 2024


    Quillfeather California is expensive. If she can't understand that not all states are the same and every state has it's own cost of living, minimun wage laws, tax laws, education laws, all types of laws, then it's her loss.
    Sep 12, 2024

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  • Something I've noticed many times, but stands out especially as I draw characters, and makes me wonder if it bugs any of my readers <.< ...

    Spoiler! :
    "The remaining Zyrean Demons, seven in number, are the final members of the royal bloodline. All brothers and sisters to eachother."


    ^ family lineage of white and ginger hair, and warm-colored or pink eyes

    The twins (Leiyt and Thundur): black hair, amber/dark blue eyes

    Scorch: orange hair, pink eyes

    Seyber: lavender hair, pale blue eyes

    Zin: dark blue hair, pale blue eyes

    Timbur: dark green hair, pale green eyes

    Jem: brown hair, gray eyes

    NO resemblances, save for Timbur and Leiyt depending on the expression, and Seyber and Zin's eyes.


    ...I guess magic took more precedence in character design than actual genetics >.>


  • RangerofIthilien
    Sep 8, 2024

    Hey Raven! Just wanted to pop over here and say where you would see it that your art is absolutely amazing! You are so so good at it and also, do you take requests?


    RavenAkuma Hi Ranger! :D Thank you so much!! I do take requests (I have a little format thingy you can use on the first post of my art thread). Though I need to warn you in fairness, I'm quite slow, especially with some projects pending now lol. But if you don't mind a bit of delay, by all means, add yours to the queue!! :D

    Raven (Tries To) Draw

    Sep 8, 2024


    RangerofIthilien Amazing! And I don't mind at all! I'll pop over and make a request although I don't think I'll be needing a form. The characters I have in mind already have them loll
    Sep 8, 2024


  • alliyah
    Sep 7, 2024

    Hey there and welcome to YWS! Does your username happen to be a reference to Edgar Allan Poe? XD


    RavenAkuma *gasp* why yes, how did you know?? XDD
    Sep 7, 2024


    AkiraEliza the wish to understand smart people. its a big one.
    Sep 13, 2024

  • I don't normally tease things like this but I'm so proud of this outline ToT

    Spoiler! :
    This is Leiyt and finally, a stroke of luck or something because he's turning out well!!! The hair was the hardest part since there's a lot of layering going on here lol, I'm also figuring out proportions and fit more as I go (shoutout to @SkyVibes for her helpful tips!), and now I'm using that to revamp my characters' designs a bit!

    Big art drop coming soon that will bleed into another minor, but fun and helpful project in TFR! I'm so excited to share with you guys!! :D


    Image


    JazzicusMaximus ooooouh that's cool!
    Sep 6, 2024


    Omni this is Le(i)y(t) @Ley sorry
    Sep 6, 2024

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  • If any of you can handle relatively heavy themes, I would appreciate any and all feedback on this poem! It's inspired by a series of personal stories I've learned over the years, addressing an issue that I wish would be on more peoples' radar, as it so often seems to be forgotten. And since the story isn't really my own, I could use a bit of help polishing it.

    Spoiler! :
    (And no it's not political)


    Mother Bird, Mother Bird

  • Does anyone know where you can find some quality masks, preferably of the Venetian style?? No reason >.>

    Spoiler! :
    I am totally NOT plotting to expand my collection with the birthday money I lost then found >.>

  • If you need a quick break from writing, reviewing, RPing, or anything...Maybe I can help, because it's time for Raven's song of the month! *cue theme song, whatever you imagine that sounds like*

    To help with that unwinding, I've got one that defies my typical genre! This is an old gem that I remember as a little kid so it's very nostalgic -and I'm curious if some of you will feel the same. The instrumentals are very pretty, and the lyrics present a somber yet intriguing situation where the singer has only 24 hours to live, and the realization of how much she's been missing out on amid a rush of emotion.

    Genre: soft rock, alternative

    "Been given 24 hours to tie up loose ends, to make amends. His eyes said it all, I started to fall, and the silence deafened. Head spinning round, no time to sit down, just wanted to run and run and run. "Be careful," they say, "Don't wish life away." Now I've one day..."

    https://youtu.be/STiW5-fqHC4?si=pYmU6cuPDitITzKS


    Horisun I clicked on the link, fully ready to be rickrolled, and was pleasantly surprised by a very pretty song : )
    Sep 1, 2024


    RavenAkuma I am glad you enjoyed :)

    Spoiler! :
    Tbh I have never rickrolled anyone, still waiting for a good opportunity to blindside everybody XDD

    Sep 1, 2024



Man is by nature a political animal.
— Aristotle