OMG!!!! I'm in love with it. I love the rhymes. I just love it. It's awesome. I'm in complete and utter awe. It's beautiful. Plus I read it while a really cool song was playing on my computer so that added to the effect. Lol! Great job. I congratulate you with the Awesomest Poem Award*.
*Awesomest Poem Award doesn't actually exist. ...Sadly. Cry, yes I know.