Honestly I liked and did not like this at the same time. I have to say, this is pretty well-thought through when you look at it. I love the originality and the smoothness, and it's got attitude, which adds points for voice. I'm glad this is not another one of those annoying cliche break-up sob stories I see so much on YWS.
But, when you really look at this form, I doubt the guy will be the one with the actual problem. A snobbish sounding girl like this will have a pretty tough time finding love if this what she looks at and the attitude she carries around while doing it. Plus, many of these things is what makes a person who they are, so that guy will have to change himself a lot to satisfy her.
But, that is the only problem I, personally, had with this. Overall it's a pretty cool idea.
"If you ever have a problem don't say 'Hey God I have a big problem.' Rather 'Hey Problem... I have a big God and it's all going to be okay."
