End of Life

This one is very random. It's not like I'm suffering this whole depression thing anyway. I just thought that I want to feel those 'emotions' for one second (hehe) because I know someone's out there suffering alone. So,I hope you enjoy and feel free to give your review.

It was dark and stormy night,
I was drowning in my own mind.
I submerged quicker and deeper;
Into my own incomprehensible mind.

I was searching for an answer,
Why do bad things always stay in me?
These devilish thoughts tortured me;
And almost impossible for me to escape.

The clock’s striking at 2.00 am;
I shut my eyes to ease the pain.
Partial of me hoping for silence,
I let darkness to conquer my grudge.

Another night had gone so fast,
I dreamed to end this wasted pain.
I couldn’t sustain any longer,
Body burdened by my heavy heart of stone.

I pulled away to face the pain,
I walked down this broken path.
For one second I find hope,
But it drifted away to sorrow’s hold.

I couldn’t go on pretending anymore,
Behind this mask I suffer loneliness.
“Are you okay? Will you be just fine?”
But none of them never really wanted to know.

This pain visits me every single night;
It hurts to take every single breathe.
I took a razor to paint my wrist,
Hoping a cut to break my vein.

One last time I’m still hoping,
That someone will hear my sorrow cries.
I was searching and wait for nothing,
I ran towards the end of life.

Hey xhellysmx I am no pro in poetry but honestly i love this poem.

“Are you okay? Will you be just fine?”
But none of them never really wanted to know.

I hate that sometimes this is true. Haha..You are good with the punctuation.

But there is a sentence that kinda disturbed my enjoyment while reading it.

The clock’s striking at 2.00 am;

-Snoweary