Okay dasiamari here to review your...sentence. Okay this is good but a little cliche. You also spelled tomorrow wrong.(I always do!) And it says your a new user so welcome! Maybe you can find someplace else to post this also, since this is not a poem.
Forever isn't today I think you need a comma here or tommorow and here its now.
So it will look like this Forever isn't today, or tomorrow, its now.
Know that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she'll think of me as a plain old Jain told a story 'bout a man who was to afraid to fly so he never did land. ~Train
These simple few words hold so much meaning that I cannot explain. But, it was nice - the quote I mean. You are a new member so I think I shall wish you good luck and keep writing.
Always and Never are two words to always remember never to use.
Very good,er, quote. It holds a nice and complex meaning, a meaning so deep that it honestly took me a good minute to figure it out. Like said before, it needs proper punctuation so that it's not a run-on sentence. All in all, though, very good, uh, quote. I see that you're a new member and I wish you luck getting around here. It's a really friendly site and I'm sure you'll enjoy yourself here. I hope to see you around, and keep writing!
I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away. — Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro
